Friday, July 12, 2013

untitled - work in progress


Prologue

     Rain came down in torrents, soaking Lauren from head to toe. She was unable to see much farther than 5 feet in front of her on the dark deserted road. While trudging along with a single suit case Lauren cursed herself for being so impulsive and setting out on her trip without checking the weather or her map first.

     Just my luck, Lauren thought, to be stuck with no gas in the middle of a sudden down-poor, at least 10 miles from the nearest town, and lost in the dark to top it off. She had merely wanted to get an early start to her trip and now she was in a very fortuitous situation with no one to help her out.

     As Lauren rounded yet another bend in the road she spotted a light in the distance. Steadily, she made her way toward the only sign of civilization and help, wondering the whole time if it wouldn’t have been more prudent to have left her belongings behind in the car. As Lauren got closer to her beacon of hope she realized she was nearing in on a farm. While Lauren’s attention focused on the canvas of her surroundings she failed to see the drop off in the road ahead of her and slid down a quarter mile of the road hitting her head as she went and blacking out.


 

Chapter 1

Jack smiled at his 5 year old daughter, Natalie, as she prattled on and on about her day. Keeping his eyes on the road; however, had become a recent priority with the sudden deluge they were caught in.

“And then Bess said that they were going to have new kittens, so I was thinking it would be a good idea for us to have some around the farm.”

“You were, were you?” Jack replied mildly.

 

1 comment:

Jessica Lynn Moser said...

Let me know what you think... I'm trying to carve time out to write and eventually get published in print.